Echo

damnit Indi I have t be honest. don't I?
But I suppose i want to help you.

OK...up close I can barely understand it. There's a shiz-load of scribbles and it's very hard to it make out. At least far away I can get the jist of the picture. However I notice a lot of mistakes that you've covered up. First of all I like her pose, it seems lingering...her arms are in good placement. However her head and torso seem to be very stiff. and the reflection should more blurred and not as bright as indi herself.

The background....Um..what it the background exactly? To be completely honest, it's nothing but a bunch of scribbles to me. The filter you used on it...doesn't make it any better. It's very distracting to the picture itself.

Allover I can see what you've been trying to do.
Cover your mistakes.
Like I said, I know it's difficult, but perspective is the most important thing in a picture. Without it, it's lifeless. You need to worry about covering up the mistakes and actually try fixing them. Don't feel ashamed to post your mistakes. It's better to at least "see" and "understand" the picture, than being unable to comprehend what's even there. Trust me I used to be the ame way....trying to cover up all my mistakes cuz I was too lazy and stubborn to fix them :/ (not calling you lazy XD)

Well...overall I think the picture has a nice impact once you look at it for a minute. It's concept very pretty yet dark.
I hope I didn't seem a too harsh when criticizing you...But hell everyone needs a little bit of a kick in the ass once and a while.
I'm sorry X3