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Moral of the story: BUY ICE CREAMMMMM
ok.. this is the first 'flash' file I've ever submitted :iconufufuplz: so I've got a bad feeling there's gonna be a ton of problems....... so this is probs gonna be another scrap.
but anyway, huge THANK YOU to *Atamask for helping my loads with this D: flash is SO HARD.... AHHH it makes me want to throw things. Because it makes no sense XDD especially since I'm so used to photoshop tools

I submitted the original of this last March (in scraps). I decided to redo it and experiment my first button animation with it D: this took WAY longer than it needed to. and it's still sooo yucky DX

I just wanted to submit something before I leave in a few hours. so voila. The only problem with this excerpt is that it's way far in.. so I had to change a ton of things so it would make a little more sense. like ex, I had to make characters conveniently talk about events from way earlier.. it was obnoxious (I hate when it happens in movies etc XD) but I TRIED OTL and a lot of this just lost its meaning from lack of context. but oh well, I think it's ok as long as you don't think about that.. wait..

This. I KNOW IM TERRIBLE D: Don't throw tomatoes at me! *runs off*
wow long description is long.

brb in a week! : )
Indi, Ren, Kiya, and ice cream dude c) me

ps this was way funnier at 3 in the morning.......... o_o
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silverwind10123 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
All I could say at the end was "Awwwwwwwww" Wonderful comic you did a great job!!
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indui Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahhh yay!! Thank you so much for reading it! :)
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HeavensDawn Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
AWWW ;w; this is the most cutest/sadest/hottest comic I've ever read
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL HOTTEST. thank you :hug:!! it was fun!
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EpicMyst Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so precious. You execute humor very well. XD
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw thank you very much :)!!
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:iconmoonlitemeadows:
MoonliteMeadows Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Amazing. I liked it a lot!
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DarkDryad17 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
DAWWW SO CUTE
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LuziferWhite Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
good story
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!!
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:iconquetzalesmeral:
QuetzalEsmeral Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist
LOVED IT1!!!!!! :la:
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner May 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAYA 8D
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:iconquetzalesmeral:
QuetzalEsmeral Featured By Owner May 28, 2011  Hobbyist
Is it based on a past experience XD ?
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HAHAH.... I wish XD
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:iconquetzalesmeral:
QuetzalEsmeral Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist
:3
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Sirairial Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was absolutely amazing! :pat:
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :hug:!
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Sirairial Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are welcome! :iconindigostamp1::iconindigostamp2:
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:glomp:
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Tacoly Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aah I love their faces :O Especially Indi's. So cute xD
Very nice story too (: Wonderful work!
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Tenjilover Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
Well this is cool to me at least~ <3333
ICE CREAM; IT SAVES LIVES. :U
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WillowEscapee Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@_@ that was so adorable! I loved the ending. It was so sweet and unexpected.
And Indi's faces in some of those panels were just too cute! >3<
I hope you make another short story like this again some time 8D it was so much fun to read!
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indui Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wahh thanks so muchh!! I'm thinking about it 8D cuz it was fun to make!
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KittyStardraco Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
AWwww i really enjoyed this
great work
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:iconindui:
indui Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw I'm glad 8DD Thanks so much :)
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TamsosPadaras Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
AWESOME work!
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!!
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Shadowsluver Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg.... this is just so fricken cuteee :heart:
Indiii, omggg <33 she's so cute, I want to take her home <333
For your first time ever doing this in Flash, it's really good Indui <333 Flash is a hard program, I agree -sobs-
Awww, BUBBLE GUM ICECREAM SO YUMMY :heart: I agree, so good <33
It's true what Indi said, Ice cream always seems to make you feel happier.... lol, it's magical
ooooo, I really like Ren... owo *is shot for becoming a fangirlOTL*
This is magnificent Indui <33 I can't wait to see more from you~! Have fun on your trip~!
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WAhhhh :'DDD Thank you so much! gahh I can't even take much credit for thattt XDDD I had so much help but thank you so much!! YES ITS THE TRUTH! Ice cream = happinesss <333 yay I'm glad you like Ren 8) :hug: :glomp: THANKS (for like the third time I think XDDD!!! :hug: )
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Shadowsluver Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
but you're the one who made it <3333
I want some now...;u; INDI CAN I HAVE ICECREAM?? 8DDD
lmao it's fine~!
Yes I loev ren D: I want him
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ssumppg Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconawwwplz: SOOO CUTE!!! :love: :+favlove:
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!! 8)
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Caroline429 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
This is amazing!!
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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AetherealBunny Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student General Artist
... hmm... the only issues I picked out, where that Indi's height seemed to change a lot(I would pick out the pages if they were numbered lol) and eyes varied a bit too much at the end. Eyes can be a huge part in showing age, and it seemed like she aged around the time she was dropped off. The angle she presents the ice cream in the car, it seems like the angle is too high, or something else...I can't quite tell, it just doesn't seem nature for a preteen(I'm guessing she's about 10-12 here). Maybe it's the size of her hands and arm...

She also seems to be too tall when the car is driving off.

owo I'm sure I could find other things to note(yeah, I don't call just noting errors critiquing), but ah well. Sorry I didn't actually critique, but I guess I'm just a bit too lazy now ._.; Sorry...
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was thinking about numbering them, but I was running out of time XD I'll do that next time tho, that seems like it would be helpful for critiques.
Hmm, well the specifics of Indi here... she's around 14 yrs old and is 5'1. (and the car Ren drives isn't isn't like a truck, so it's pretty low to the ground). But I do see what you mean about the aging. Drawing this helped me realize how much work I have to do before I actually attempt making the comic XDD I don't have the characteristics of each charrie completely set (like Ren's hair style changed literally in every scene...). And I'll keep that in mind about the eyes! that's something I've been having trouble with for a while.
thanks so much <333 it's really helpful!
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AetherealBunny Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Then I think the trouble is that you make her look too small in earlier panels...

You're welcome!
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OHhhh! ok I'll pay attention to arm length too then :D
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AetherealBunny Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student General Artist
On the side note, it's just some nitpicking mentioned above really lol.
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pirate-pet Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
My, my, that's a pretty swell loading bar you got there hurr : D

AND YOU TAMED THE FLASH MONSTER YAYYYYYYY :iconepicboogieplz: It looks kind of cleaned-up, too, compared to the last version :'D (If not, we'll just assume that the fancy clickers and loading bar make it look better, mmkay?)

ANYWHO- Indi is as ADORABLE as ever, with those big ol' eyes, and those two random hairs that stick up on top of her head.... lol XD But you know what I JUST realized this time you submitted it?

It's snowing.

But that's the BEST time to get ice cream, AMIRITE? :iconlolyesplz:

So- wonderful job as always!! :D
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GAH. You can hardly say I tamed it......... ROFL I made someone else do half the work and I just filled in the slides ......o_o
and WHAHhhhh thank you so much :'DDDDD :hug: AND ROFL I KNOW, in temperatures below 30 it's the best time to eat icecream :iconimhappyplz:s r
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pirate-pet Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh. Well, then there's still a Flash monster rampant, I suppose... :noes:

And I AGREE. I mean who would want to eat ice cream at any other time? FYIII it MELTS above thirty, so it's only the smart to eat it when it won't~! 8D

... well, something like that... XD
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes and it's hungry................ :paranoid:
AND AGAIN YES! Genius. This is how the world should work--in this completely logical function D: *dominates world with ice cream*
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pirate-pet Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*feeds sacrifices* 8>

Haha I would want to live in an ice cream dominated world for sure! 8D *eats ice cream*
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LULS, who wouldn't!! 8D
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Doksuri Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Awww that was so cute
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank youuuu 8)
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DarkRedPhantomX Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Professional Artist
That was awesome!! Geez, I love your art :love::love::love:
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indui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ;w;!!
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DarkRedPhantomX Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Professional Artist
It's true... about the bubble gum flavor too >w<
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