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I'm not finished yet

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well this took a while... but I'm not even sure if I like it too much -_-
I tried combining the bg technique I used in my APSA works with my regular character style, and this was the turn out.

Critiques are welcome C:!

Sorry for my massive amount of uploads lately :XD: once college starts I'll stop, I swear :lol:

charries and art c) me
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Oh my worddd that perspective! What a fantastic usage of different body angles, it really shows off your lighting skills. There's even a lot of emotion coming through Indi even though we can't see her eyes!

The one thing that is definitely apparent to me is the weight distribution in the background character's legs. The ground is definitely slanted upwards; even distribution would cause the character to lean downwards a tad. It seems to me that the knees are trying to portray even distribution, but the body is remaining upright. I see a bit of bend in the higher leg, but I feel that a stronger bend would fit the ground angle a bit better. The incline is pretty harsh, after all.

Otherwise, both the foreground and background seem to have equal importance and detailing in this picture! That is always a very admirable recurring theme in all of your art ovo
Keep up the good work!